『夏のヤリなおし2』制作進捗

先の投稿の通り
今夜11日（0時）より
初同人作品『夏のヤリなおし』(全84p)
販売開始しますので
手に取って頂けましたら幸いです

◆『夏のヤリなおし２』チビネーム完成
まだ処女作が販売開始前ですが
先日から続編の2の作業を開始しまして
先ほどチビネームが完成しました

チビネームとは漫画用語ではなく
僕がただそう呼んでるだけなのですが
’漫画のセリフとコマ割りのみ’を
描き起こしたものです
（絵は無し、あってもメモ程度）

商業デビュー当時から全ての作品で
やっている手法でA3の大きな紙を
16分割してそこにひたすら描いては消してを
繰り返しネームの原型を作っています

僕は
漫画はネームで全てが決まると
思っていましてそうすると
そのネームをどれだけ良いものに、
後々見直したときにあ～ちょっとここ良くないかも
…なんて思いたくないわけです

小さく分割することで消しゴムを使わず
何度もトライ&エラーを素早くでき、
16ページ分を見渡せるので
全体のテンポや見せゴマなど
引いた目で客観視できる非常に
効率的な方法だと思っています
（現在連載を持っている駆除人なども
この方法を取っています）

50pの商業ネームに対し
チビネームでは80pや100pくらい
毎回のびのびとまず描ききり
そこからぎゅっと
詰めていくなんてことも多いです

◆
さて続編『夏のヤリなおし２』ですが
全91pになってしまいました

長すぎるのでは？と
思うところもあるのですが
好きなように描けるのも同人の魅力ですし
無駄なページがあるわけでもないので
これを形にしたいなと

ただ問題もあり
1月下旬までに販売できたらとも
考えていましてそうすると
今日(１２月１０日)から数えて
あと40日ほどで91p脱稿は
ちょっと厳しいんじゃないかと
悩んでいるところです
※販売価格を下げて分割する手も、
それならさほど間を空けず
3作目もお届けできます

1作目の『夏のヤリなおし』は
2021年8月末～12月上旬に脱稿したので
およそ４カ月弱という長い時間が
かかってしまいましたが
この４カ月の中で
次回作を見越した同人の
作業工程の確率化と効率化を
相当詰めたので
それが２作目からは活きてくれるでしょう

まだまだ考えることは多いですが
時間が空いてる今のうちに
できるだけ進めてみます

頑張りますので
応援宜しくお願い致します

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As per my earlier post
Tonight, from the 11th (midnight)
I will start selling my first doujin work,
"Summer Sex Rehearsal" (84 pages)
I hope you can pick it up.
I'd be happy if you could pick it up.

The name of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2" is completed!
I've been working on the sequel 2 since the other day.
The other day, I started work on the sequel, 2.
I've just completed the small name.

The name "Chibiname" is not a manga term.
It's just what I call it.
It's a drawing of the 'dialogue and frame layout of the manga only'.
I drew it up.
(There are no pictures, or if there are, they're just notes.)

It's a method I've used in all my works
since my commercial debut.
I took a large A3 sheet of paper and
divided it into 16 sections.
I divided a large A3 sheet of paper
into 16 parts and repeatedly drew and erased on it.
I draw and erase on it repeatedly to
make a prototype of the name.

I believe
I believe that everything in manga is determined by the name.
I believe that everything is determined by the name.
I believe that the name determines everything.
I don't want to think,
"Oh, maybe this part isn't good..." when I review it later.
I don't want to think, "Oh, maybe this part isn't good.

By dividing it into smaller pieces,
I can do it without using an eraser.
You can quickly make multiple trials and errors, and
You can see the whole 16 pages.
I can look over 16 pages and see the
overall tempo and presentation.
I think it's a very efficient way to look at things objectively.
I think it's a very efficient method.
(The exterminator, who is currently writing a series
(The exterminator, who is
currently serialized, also uses this method.)

In contrast to a 50-page commercial name
(The exterminators who are currently serialized
also use this method.
The first thing to do is to draw it out freely each time.
There are many cases where
There are also many cases where
I have to tighten things up.

I'm sure you'll agree.
Now, the sequel, "Summer sex again 2"...
It's now 91 pages long!

Isn't it too long? I think so.
There is a part that I think
It is also the charm of doujin that you can draw as you like.
It's not like there are any wasted pages.
I'd like to give this a form.

But there is a problem.
I'd like to be able to sell it by the end of January.
I've been thinking about it.
If I count from today (December 10th)
I think it's going to be a little difficult to
publish 91 pages in about 40 days
I'm wondering if it's too much to ask.
I'm worried about that.
I'm wondering if I can lower the selling price and split it up.
If that's the case, I'll be able to deliver the
third one without too much of a gap.
I can deliver the third one without much delay.

The first one, "Summer Rehearsal," will be available from
The first one, "Summer Sex Reunion," was
written between the end of August and the
beginning of December 2021.
It took me a long time to finish it
It took me a long time.
In these four months
In these four months, I was able to improve
the probability and efficiency of the work
process in anticipation of my next work.
In these four months, I made a lot of
improvements in the probability and
efficiency of the work process
and efficiency of the work process
I'm sure that will come in handy for the second one.

I still have a lot to think about.
I'll try to make as much progress as
possible while I still have free time.
I'll try to get as much done as I can.

I'll do my best.
Thank you for your support!

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