初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事

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▼本日のメニュー
・『夏のヤリなおし』現在(12月18日)の状況
・初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事
・続編『夏のヤリなおし２』進捗とアイデア
・プラン特典について
・商業のちょっとした話

◆『夏のヤリなおし』現在(12月18日)の状況
現在でも毎日ありがたいことに
お買い求め下さる方々のおかげで
新作ランキングに入り続けています

決して控えめではなく
現実的な目標が40部でしたので
その100倍の成果を
上げられたのは望外以外の言葉が
見つからないほどです
（FANZA＋dlsite合算）

販売ページの数字1増えるだけで
ここまで嬉しいものなのかと
今も一喜一憂しています

◆初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事
・
す～っごい色んな事がありました

2日目に『夏のヤリなおし』を
商業デジタルコミック化しませんか？
とのお話を頂きました
FANZAやdlsiteだけでなく
他の販売サイトでも広く流通して
みませんか？という内容でした
同人を読む方であれば
誰もが知っている成人向け雑誌を
いくつも出してる会社だったのですが
断ってしまいました

初同人だったので自分の作品が
売り上げ含めどういった動向を見せるのか、
雑味をなくし純粋に
自分の力量を知りたかったためです

翌日にはFANZAさんからも
「初同人なのにやりますねぇ！
支援サイトみたら2作目描いてるの？
楽しみにしてますよ」的な
（超丁寧な内容でしたが）

上記お二方と少しメールのやりとりをして
同人や成人向けの取り巻く
環境が少しずつ分かってきて、
編集さんらの新作チェックの速さにも
驚きました
あ～やっぱ見てるんだ～って

その他普通にお話を
頂いたりもしたのですが
「好きに作品を作りたい。」
からスタートした同人活動なので
今は全てシャットアウトして
制作を楽しみしたいなと毎日を
過ごしています

・
同人活動を10年以上やってる
友人が1人います
お金の話や売れ行きなど
深い話もお互いできて
その話を聞くのが好きです

流行りもあったりして
売れるときや厳しいときも
あるのですが
この人楽しそうだな～
というのが第一印象

自分が描いたものを
買ってくれる人がいるなら
それより楽しいことは
ないだろうと、
「調子に乗るなよ
同人はそんな甘くねぇぞ！」と
この先辛さを味わうかも
しれませんが楽しみながら
活動していこうと決めました

各支援サイトで
フォローもありがとうございます

◆続編『夏のヤリなおし２』進捗とアイデア

もし続編待ってるよ～と
思って下さる方がいらっしゃるなら
ありがとうございます！

では進捗です
一昨日、全ページの大ラフを終えて
昨夜から下書きに入りました
※
大ラフとは
デッサンのようなキャラのポーズ(アタリ)を
取る作業です
これを一通り入れることで
完成図がイメージし易くなります
構図や整合性は大丈夫かな？とか
時間経過無しに急に体位が変わってるじゃん、
とかおかしいところにも気づけます

下書きは現在２０ｐほど
終わっています
下書き作業をフォトショップから
クリスタに変えました
エロは構図（特に顔の向き）の変化が
激しくキャンバスの回転が
有効で速度が上がりましたやったぜ

12月は残り2週間、
もしかしたら結構良い
ところまでいけるかもしれません

・悩み
大きな流れは固まっているのですが
ストーリーの調整を頻繁にしていています
ページの変動もかなりあって
現在全110pです

休憩を取るたび、
こういう流れやシチュもいいかも！
というのが出てきちゃって、
単純にこのキャラクター達を
使って描きたい事が多すぎるため
なんですね

以前凄く売れてる同人を
読んだら100pちょっとあって
エロくて素晴らしいのですが
途中で「長くね？」て
思ってしまったことがありました

一度に読めて満足感も得られるのは
70~80ｐあたりなのでしょうか
逆に導入込みで40pとかだと
自分は「短いもっと読みたいな」と
思うことが多いです

中身の出来が最優先なのは
当然なのですがこういった部分で
手探り感がぬぐえず苦戦しています

◆プラン特典について
支援サイト全部で8人プランに
入ってくださいました
お金が入るのはまだ先で
手数料引いて4500円くらいに。

早速普段漫画制作に使っている
レンタルサーバー費(2カ月半分)と
コピー用紙買ってきました
これでほぼきっかり支援金は使い切り。
皆さんありがとうございます！

今後動き出すであろう
各プランの特典に加え
”水蓮の宿”のプランに入るとこれが
見れる・・・というメインが欲しいな

漫画にするか差分を活用するかは
未定ですが
夏ヤリの新規のHシーンを主軸に
据えようかなと思っています
数枚、数ページかもしれませんが
啓人と葵はあのあと買い物に行って
ヤリましたとか
実はその夜にも・・・とか

同人はストーリーがありますが
プランはショートなので
Hのみに注目できますし
「あ、これ作画の練習にも？
美味しいかも」と

特典ゆえ
ラフっぽさが出てしまうことも
あるかもしれませんが
葵や水蓮姉さんらを
好きになって下さったのなら
美味い特典になるかもしれません

本編完成が優先なので
気長に待ちつつ
引き続き応援してもらえたら
嬉しいです

◆商業について
11月26日に発売された
コミックス駆除人4巻ですが
昨日重版が決まりました

来年1月下旬には
効率厨魔導師～（略して効率）
の最新10巻が発売されます
昨日打ち合わせしていたのですが
コツコツと部数を重ねています

どちらも手に取って頂き
ありがとうございます

最近Twitterでも
同人の話ばかりしてるので
「お前商業ないがしろにするなよ！」と
なりますよね
効率は来年夏前まで、
駆除人は春までの原稿を脱稿済みです
（別途単行本作業のお休みは発生しますが）
スケジュールや掲載タイミングは
編集部にお任せしていますので
また載ったときはツイートしますので
「おっ最近エロ同人描いた浅川か、
商業の方はどうなんだどれどれ
見てやるか」と
読んでもらえましたら幸いです

月内にあと
１，２回投稿予定です

It's a very long story.
Please read it in your spare time to pass the time.

Today's menu
The current status of "Summer Sex Reunion" (December 18)
What happened one week after the sale of the first DL doujin
Progress and ideas for the sequel "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2
Plan benefits
A little story about commerce

Current situation of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi" (December 18)
Thanks to all the people who buy it every day!
Thanks to the people who buy it
Thanks to the people who buy it every day,
it continues to be in the ranking of new releases!

This is not an understatement.
My realistic goal was 40 copies, so
I can't tell you how much
I can't even find the words to express my gratitude
I can't even find the right words.
(FANZA + dlsite combined)

I can't tell you how happy I am that just
one more number on the sales page
I can't believe how happy I am
I'm still happy and sad about it.

The events of the first week after the sale
of the first DL doujin
A lot of things happened.
So many things have happened!

The next day, I received a message from Fanza.
You're doing great for your first doujin!
I saw on the support site that you're working on a second work.
I'm looking forward to it.
（I'm looking forward to it." (It was a very polite message.)

After exchanging a few emails with the above two people
I started to understand the environment surrounding doujin and adult-oriented
I started to understand the environment surrounding doujin and adult-oriented
I was also surprised at how fast the editors were checking
I was surprised at how quickly the editors were checking out new works.
I was surprised at how quickly the editors were checking out the new works.

I also received some
I've also been asked to do the usual things.
I started my doujin activities from "I want to create my own works.
But since I started out as a doujin
I just want to shut them all out.
I want to enjoy my work.
I'm spending my days

I've been doing it for over 10 years.
I have one friend who has been doing doujin activities for more than 10 years.
I have one friend.
We can talk about money, sales, etc.
We can talk about money, sales, etc.
I like to listen to her talk.

There are some trends.
There are times when sales are good and times when they are tough.
But...
My first impression of this person is that he seems to be having fun.
That's my first impression.

If there are people who will buy what I draw
If there are people who will buy what I draw
I thought, "What could be more fun than that?
I thought.
"Don't get carried away!
Don't get carried away, doujin is not that easy! and
You may experience some hardships in the future
But I have decided
I've decided to enjoy the activity.

Thank you for following me on each support site.
Thank you for your support!

The sequel "Summer Sex Reunion 2" progress and ideas

I'm waiting for the sequel!
If there are people who are waiting for the sequel
Thank you very much!

Here's the progress!
The day before yesterday, I finished the rough draft of all pages.
I started drafting last night.
What is a rough draft?
What is a rough draft?
A rough sketch is a drawing of a character's pose.
It's like a drawing.
By doing all this, it's easier to visualize
It will be easier to visualize the finished image.
Is the composition and consistency okay? or
or "Is the body position suddenly changed without any time lapse?
I can also notice strange things like that.

The draft is now about 20 pages
The draft is now about 20 pages done.
I changed the drafting process from Photoshop
I've changed the drafting process from Photoshop to Krista.
The composition (especially the direction of the face) of the erotic
I'm very happy with it.
I'm glad I did!

December is only two weeks away.
I think I might be able to
I think I might be able to get pretty good.

Trouble.
I've got the big picture down, but
I've been making frequent adjustments to the story.
There are a lot of changes in the pages.
It's currently 110 pages in total.

Every time I take a break
Every time I take a break, I come up with new ideas for the flow and situations.
Every time I take a break, I come up with new ideas.
I simply have too many things to draw with these characters.
There are simply too many things I want to draw with these characters.
That's why.

I read a very successful doujin once.
I read a very successful doujin once, and it was a little over 100 pages long.
It was erotic and wonderful, but
But halfway through, I was like, "Isn't that too long?" I thought.
I thought, "Isn't that too long?

I wonder if it's around 70~80p that you can read it in one go and get a sense of satisfaction.
I'd say it's around 70~80 pages.
On the other hand, if the introduction is 40p or so
I often think, "I want to read more.
I want to read more.

Of course, the quality of the content is the top priority.
But I can't help but feel
I can't get rid of the feeling of groping, and I'm struggling.

Plan Benefits
There are 8 people who have joined the plan on all the support sites.
We have 8 people who have joined our plan!
We're still waiting for the money to come in.
I'm still waiting for the money to come in.

I'm going to start using it for my manga production.
I bought a rental server (half for two months) and
I bought some copy paper.
I've almost completely used up all my support money.
Thank you very much everyone!

In addition to the benefits of each plan
In addition to the benefits of each plan
I'd like to have a main feature that says,
"You can see this when you enter the Water Lotus Inn plan.
I'd like to have a main feature where
you can see this when you enter the "Water Lotus Inn" plan.

I'm not sure if I'll make it a manga or use the differences.
I'm undecided.
I'm thinking of focusing on a new sex scene
I'm thinking of making it the main part of the story.
It may be a few pages or a few pages.
After that, Keito and Aoi went shopping and
And they had sex.
And that night...

The doujin has a story, but
But Plan is a short story.
You can focus only on the H part.
"Oh, this is good for drawing practice?
It might be good.

Because of the privilege
There may be some roughness in the plan
but
I hope you like Aoi, Suiren, and the others.
If you like Aoi and Suiren
It might be a tasty bonus!

My priority is to complete the main story
I hope you'll continue to support me
I hope you will continue to support me
I'll be happy if you continue to support me.

About commerce
It was released on November 26th.
Exterminators Volume 4, which was released on November 26th.
Yesterday it was reprinted!

In late January of next year
The latest 10 volumes of Efficiency Kitchen Mage
will be released in late January next year.
We had a meeting yesterday, and
The number of copies is steadily increasing!

Thank you very much for picking up both of them!
Thank you very much!

I've been talking about it on Twitter
I've been talking a lot about doujinshi.
I've been getting a lot of comments like, "You're neglecting the commercial world!" I know.
I know.
The efficiency is up until next summer.
The exterminator has already finished the manuscript until spring.
（I'll be taking a break to work on the book.)
The schedule and timing of publication
I'll tweet you when it appears again.
I'll tweet you when it's published again.
"Oh, you're Asakawa, who recently drew an erotic doujin.
How's your commercial work going?
I'll take a look.
I'd be happy if you could read it.

I'm planning to post one or two more
I'm planning to post one or two more

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