謹賀新年

新年あけましておめでとうございます
サークル『水蓮の宿』の浅川です

横の窓を見ると
少しずつ日が昇ってきています
字づらだけ見ると2022年は
子供の頃に思い描いていた未来だなぁ
なんて感慨に浸りたいところですが
そんなことよりめちゃくちゃ寒いです
灯油が切れました死にそうです

本年も宜しくお願い致します。

●メニューはこちら
・初同人を出して3週間、同人活動を振り返る
・『夏のヤリなおし2』の進捗

(プラン加入者向け：今夜～明日更新予定)
・『夏のヤリなおし』カバーpsdやアイコンの配布
・『夏のヤリなおし2』冒頭紹介他

◆同人活動を振り返る
初めてのDL同人と支援サイトの開設。
販売から3週間が経ちました

おかげさまで本日6000DL突破しました
（販売サイト合算）
DL同人も書店に並ぶ商業漫画と同じで
非常に作品の移り変わりが早いですね

現在、売り上げ的には非常に
緩やかに推移し
落ち着いてきたのですが
それでも毎日数冊から数十冊
お買い求め下さる方々がいるおかげで
次回作やそれ以降、新作構想への
活力になります
本当にありがとうございます

・小話
同人をはじめたきっかけは
夏ヤリのあとがきにも書いた通り
「読みたいものは自分で描いちゃえ」
というのが一番の動機なのですが
それ以外にもいくつか理由がありました

コロナ真っ只中のときに
「大学に一度も登校せずに
在宅学習で凄く寂しい」
みたいなニュースやツイートが
バズってた時がありました
あ～あったあった！とご存じの方も
いらっしゃるのではないでしょうか

自分はコロナ関係無く常日頃から
自宅で作業しているので
寂しさやストレスとは無縁なのですが
そこに息苦しさを
感じる人が多いんだなと

ここ数年、電子書籍の成長が
著しく自分も連載している漫画
「駆除人」や「効率」の
電子の成果が良かったんですね

みんなが家に居て暇してる
↓
ははーんみんな暇過ぎて
オナニーしよるかな？
↓
じゃあ同人出すなら今が
ベストかも！

自分が読みたい描きたい同人
というだけでなく
時間を持て余してる人に
ちょっとした暇つぶしを
提供できたらという期待も
あったので
改めて同人というのものに
チャレンジして良かったです

◆『夏のヤリなおし2』の進捗

暫定ではありますが

『夏のヤリなおし2』は90p前後
前作よりも少しボリュームアップ
1月下旬に何とか販売開始したい

を目標に作業中で
現在3割のペン入れが終わっています

前回作った110pはさすがに
長すぎたので
Hシーンを削らず日常シーンを
コンパクトにまとめて
テンポを上げたり。

1～3月分の商業原稿は
脱稿済みなので問題ないのですが
その先を2月から着手したいため
同人は1月中に完成させたく、
急ぐあまりクオリティが前作より
下がってしまうのは絶対避けたいので
その辺りは注意を払いつつ
作業しています

未だ不透明な部分が
多いですが動けるときの生産力が
自分の取り柄でもあるので
頑張って進めてみます

Happy New Year!
This is Asakawa of the circle "Water Lotus Inn.

When I look at the side window
The sun is rising little by little.
If you only look at the letters, the year 2022
It's the future I envisioned when I was a child.
I'd like to be deeply moved by it, but
It's cold as hell!
I'm out of kerosene and I'm dying.

Thank you for your continued support this year.

The menu is here.
It's been three weeks since I published my first doujin,
and I'm looking back on my doujin activities.
Progress of "Summer Sex Reunion 2

(For plan subscribers: to be updated tonight and tomorrow)
Distribution of the cover psd and icons for "Summer sex reunion".
Introduction to the beginning of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2", etc.

Looking back on doujin activities
It's been three weeks since we launched our first DL doujin and support site.
It's been 3 weeks since the sale!

Thanks to all of you, we have reached 6000 DL today!
(Total of all sales sites)
DL doujins are just like commercial manga in bookstores.
DL Doujin, like commercial comics in bookstores, change very quickly.

Currently, sales are very slow
It's a very slow transition
It has settled down, but
Still, there are people who buy dozens of books
But even so, thanks to the people who buy several to dozens of copies every day
It gives me energy for my next work and
I'm really grateful.
Thank you very much!

A little story
The reason why I started the doujin
As I wrote in the postcard of Natsuyari
As I wrote in the postcard of Natsu Yari,
my main motive was to draw what I wanted to read.
But there were several other reasons.
But there were a few other reasons as well.

When I was in the middle of Corona
"I never went to college.
"It's so lonely studying at home.
There was a time when news and tweets like that
There was a time when news and tweets like,
"I never went to college and I'm home schooled and I'm so lonely.
Ah, there it is! Some of you may have heard of it.
I'm sure some of you may have heard of it.

I'm always working at home, regardless of Corona.
I'm always working at home
I don't feel lonely or stressed, but
I don't feel lonely or stressed.
I think there are many people who feel suffocated there.

In the past few years, the growth of e-books has been remarkable.
In the last few years, the growth of e-books has been remarkable.
"Exterminators" and "Efficiency."
I'm sure you've had good results with the electronic version.

Everyone's home and bored.
↓
Haha, everyone is too bored.
Do you think they're masturbating?
↓ ↓
So now might be the best time to publish a doujin.
Maybe now is the best time!

Not only do I want to read and draw doujinshi
but also
but also to give people with too much time on their hands
I'm hoping that I can offer a little something to pass the time
I was also hoping that I could provide
so I've decided to
I'm glad that I took on this
I'm glad I took the challenge.

The progress of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2

It is tentative, but

Summer Sex 2" is about 90 pages.
It's a little more voluminous than the last one.
We hope to start selling it in late January.

I'm working on it with the goal of
I'm about 30% done with the pen.

The last one, 110 pages, was indeed too long.
It was too long.
so I'm trying to keep it compact
I'm trying to make it compact and
I'm trying to increase the tempo.

The commercial manuscripts for January to March
I've already finished the commercial manuscripts for January and March, so there's no problem.
I want to start work on the next one in February.
I want to finish the doujin in January.
I don't want the quality to be lower than the previous work
I don't want the quality to be lower than the previous work
I'm working on it with caution.
I'm working on it.

There are still a lot of uncertainties.
I'm still uncertain about a lot of things, but my strength is my ability to produce when I can.
I'll do my best to keep working on it.
I'll do my best to move forward.

Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

夏ヤリ２制作中＆出来事

急に寒くなってきましたね
気付けば明日はイヴ明後日はクリスマスじゃないですか
皆さんはいかがお過ごしでしょうか

僕は両日とも人生初
クリスマス時期にエロ同人描いてるという
貴重な体験をさせてもらっています
世のカップルがイチャイチャしてるときに
こっちも最高のイチャイチャを
作って見せるぜと気張っています

◆感謝
先日『夏のヤリなおし』が5000DLを突破しました！
（販売サイト合算）
買って下さった方はもちろんのこと
レビューを付けたり書いて下さったり、
支援サイトのプランに入って下さった皆様
(2人増えました！)
本当にありがとうございます

↓少量ではありますがブックウォーカーで21冊
メロンブックスで11冊売れてました！
これもめちゃくちゃ嬉しいですありがとうございます

◆『夏のヤリなおし2』制作進捗

下書きが7~8割終わりました
ページ数含めストーリーの調整が必要で
これからもうひと手間かかりそうですが
何とか月内にペン入れinできたらと進めています

とにかく描きたい場面や
シチュエーションが溢れすぎて
どれをまず80p前後のボリューム感で
出していくか迷い唸っている状態です。

まとめるために
「エッチシーンを削りました」では
やってることが商業と同じになってしまうので
ストーリー部分をテンポ良くまとめつつ
しかしながら面白味のある話に、
そしてエッチは削らず全快で！を
心に留めつつ作業しています

ある意味楽しみながら
苦悩しているようなものなので
これはこれで良いんじゃないかなって
思っています
せっかちですが早く皆さんに
お届けしたいです

前回の投稿後、
またありがたいことに
大手から漫画のお話が来て
『夏のヤリなおし』を
一般連載しませんか？やその他
オリジナル連載やコミカライズの
提案などを頂いてとても嬉しかったです
（ここに書くということは
全部断ってしまったのですけど）

どれも魅力的な話で
もうこんな美味しい依頼は
来ないかもと思います、
初同人を制作して
間もないですがいつのまにか僕の中で
「水蓮」や「葵」が大きな存在に
なりつつあるのだと感じました
嬉しいことです

可能なら年末年始あたりに
投稿予定です

It's suddenly getting cold.
Tomorrow is Christmas Eve,
and the day after that is Christmas Day!
How are you all doing?

Both days are the first time in my life
I had the precious experience of drawing an
erotic doujin during Christmas time.
I've had the precious experience of drawing
an erotic doujin during Christmas time for the first time in my life.
When couples in the world are making out with each other
I'm trying to make the best lovey-dovey
I'm determined to make the best lovey-dovey I can.

Thank you.
The other day, "Summer Sex Rehearsal" surpassed 5000 DL!
(Total of all sales sites)
I'd like to thank not only those who bought it, but also
Not only those who bought the book,
but also those who wrote reviews and
We'd like to thank not only those who bought it,
but also those who reviewed it, wrote about it,
and joined our support site's plan.
(2 more people!).
Thank you very much!

↓We've sold 21 copies at Bookwalker
11 copies were sold at Melon Books!
Thank you very much!

Progress of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2" production
The draft is 70~80% done!
I need to adjust the story, including the number of pages.
It's going to take a little more work from now on.
I'm hoping to have it in pen by the end of the month.

Anyway, I have so many scenes and
I have so many scenes and situations I want to draw.
I'm having a hard time deciding which ones
I want to draw in a volume of about 80 pages.
I'm not sure which ones I want to draw in a volume of about 80 pages.

In order to make it coherent
I can't just say, "I've cut down on the sex scenes.
I'm trying to keep the story fast-paced.
So I'm trying to keep the story fast-paced.
However, I wanted to keep the story interesting.
And don't cut out the sex! That's what I'm trying to do.
I'm working on it, keeping in mind that

In a way, I'm having fun while
In a way, it's like I'm suffering while having fun.
I think that's a good thing.
I think it's good.
I'm impatient, but I can't wait to deliver it to you.
I'm impatient, but I want to get it to you soon.

After my last post.
I'm grateful to have received another
I got an offer from a major company to do a manga
I've been asked if I'd like to write a general series
and more! and others
I was very happy to receive proposals for original
serialization and comicalization.
and other proposals for original serialization
and comicalization, I was very happy.
(To write about it here means
I've turned them all down.)

All of them are fascinating stories.
I don't know if I'll ever get such a delicious offer again.
I don't know if I'll ever get another one like this,
but it's been a while since I created my first doujin.
It's only been a short time since
I created my first doujin, but before I knew it
I don't know how long it's been since
I created my first doujin
in my mind.
I'm glad to hear that.

If possible, I plan to post
I'm planning to post

Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事

すーーーっごく長いので
空いた時間にでも暇つぶしに読んでね

▼本日のメニュー
・『夏のヤリなおし』現在(12月18日)の状況
・初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事
・続編『夏のヤリなおし２』進捗とアイデア
・プラン特典について
・商業のちょっとした話

◆『夏のヤリなおし』現在(12月18日)の状況
現在でも毎日ありがたいことに
お買い求め下さる方々のおかげで
新作ランキングに入り続けています

決して控えめではなく
現実的な目標が40部でしたので
その100倍の成果を
上げられたのは望外以外の言葉が
見つからないほどです
（FANZA＋dlsite合算）

販売ページの数字1増えるだけで
ここまで嬉しいものなのかと
今も一喜一憂しています

◆初DL同人販売から1週間の出来事
・
す～っごい色んな事がありました

2日目に『夏のヤリなおし』を
商業デジタルコミック化しませんか？
とのお話を頂きました
FANZAやdlsiteだけでなく
他の販売サイトでも広く流通して
みませんか？という内容でした
同人を読む方であれば
誰もが知っている成人向け雑誌を
いくつも出してる会社だったのですが
断ってしまいました

初同人だったので自分の作品が
売り上げ含めどういった動向を見せるのか、
雑味をなくし純粋に
自分の力量を知りたかったためです

翌日にはFANZAさんからも
「初同人なのにやりますねぇ！
支援サイトみたら2作目描いてるの？
楽しみにしてますよ」的な
（超丁寧な内容でしたが）

上記お二方と少しメールのやりとりをして
同人や成人向けの取り巻く
環境が少しずつ分かってきて、
編集さんらの新作チェックの速さにも
驚きました
あ～やっぱ見てるんだ～って

その他普通にお話を
頂いたりもしたのですが
「好きに作品を作りたい。」
からスタートした同人活動なので
今は全てシャットアウトして
制作を楽しみしたいなと毎日を
過ごしています

・
同人活動を10年以上やってる
友人が1人います
お金の話や売れ行きなど
深い話もお互いできて
その話を聞くのが好きです

流行りもあったりして
売れるときや厳しいときも
あるのですが
この人楽しそうだな～
というのが第一印象

自分が描いたものを
買ってくれる人がいるなら
それより楽しいことは
ないだろうと、
「調子に乗るなよ
同人はそんな甘くねぇぞ！」と
この先辛さを味わうかも
しれませんが楽しみながら
活動していこうと決めました

各支援サイトで
フォローもありがとうございます

◆続編『夏のヤリなおし２』進捗とアイデア

もし続編待ってるよ～と
思って下さる方がいらっしゃるなら
ありがとうございます！

では進捗です
一昨日、全ページの大ラフを終えて
昨夜から下書きに入りました
※
大ラフとは
デッサンのようなキャラのポーズ(アタリ)を
取る作業です
これを一通り入れることで
完成図がイメージし易くなります
構図や整合性は大丈夫かな？とか
時間経過無しに急に体位が変わってるじゃん、
とかおかしいところにも気づけます

下書きは現在２０ｐほど
終わっています
下書き作業をフォトショップから
クリスタに変えました
エロは構図（特に顔の向き）の変化が
激しくキャンバスの回転が
有効で速度が上がりましたやったぜ

12月は残り2週間、
もしかしたら結構良い
ところまでいけるかもしれません

・悩み
大きな流れは固まっているのですが
ストーリーの調整を頻繁にしていています
ページの変動もかなりあって
現在全110pです

休憩を取るたび、
こういう流れやシチュもいいかも！
というのが出てきちゃって、
単純にこのキャラクター達を
使って描きたい事が多すぎるため
なんですね

以前凄く売れてる同人を
読んだら100pちょっとあって
エロくて素晴らしいのですが
途中で「長くね？」て
思ってしまったことがありました

一度に読めて満足感も得られるのは
70~80ｐあたりなのでしょうか
逆に導入込みで40pとかだと
自分は「短いもっと読みたいな」と
思うことが多いです

中身の出来が最優先なのは
当然なのですがこういった部分で
手探り感がぬぐえず苦戦しています

◆プラン特典について
支援サイト全部で8人プランに
入ってくださいました
お金が入るのはまだ先で
手数料引いて4500円くらいに。

早速普段漫画制作に使っている
レンタルサーバー費(2カ月半分)と
コピー用紙買ってきました
これでほぼきっかり支援金は使い切り。
皆さんありがとうございます！

今後動き出すであろう
各プランの特典に加え
”水蓮の宿”のプランに入るとこれが
見れる・・・というメインが欲しいな

漫画にするか差分を活用するかは
未定ですが
夏ヤリの新規のHシーンを主軸に
据えようかなと思っています
数枚、数ページかもしれませんが
啓人と葵はあのあと買い物に行って
ヤリましたとか
実はその夜にも・・・とか

同人はストーリーがありますが
プランはショートなので
Hのみに注目できますし
「あ、これ作画の練習にも？
美味しいかも」と

特典ゆえ
ラフっぽさが出てしまうことも
あるかもしれませんが
葵や水蓮姉さんらを
好きになって下さったのなら
美味い特典になるかもしれません

本編完成が優先なので
気長に待ちつつ
引き続き応援してもらえたら
嬉しいです

◆商業について
11月26日に発売された
コミックス駆除人4巻ですが
昨日重版が決まりました

来年1月下旬には
効率厨魔導師～（略して効率）
の最新10巻が発売されます
昨日打ち合わせしていたのですが
コツコツと部数を重ねています

どちらも手に取って頂き
ありがとうございます

最近Twitterでも
同人の話ばかりしてるので
「お前商業ないがしろにするなよ！」と
なりますよね
効率は来年夏前まで、
駆除人は春までの原稿を脱稿済みです
（別途単行本作業のお休みは発生しますが）
スケジュールや掲載タイミングは
編集部にお任せしていますので
また載ったときはツイートしますので
「おっ最近エロ同人描いた浅川か、
商業の方はどうなんだどれどれ
見てやるか」と
読んでもらえましたら幸いです

月内にあと
１，２回投稿予定です

It's a very long story.
Please read it in your spare time to pass the time.

Today's menu
The current status of "Summer Sex Reunion" (December 18)
What happened one week after the sale of the first DL doujin
Progress and ideas for the sequel "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2
Plan benefits
A little story about commerce

Current situation of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi" (December 18)
Thanks to all the people who buy it every day!
Thanks to the people who buy it
Thanks to the people who buy it every day,
it continues to be in the ranking of new releases!

This is not an understatement.
My realistic goal was 40 copies, so
I can't tell you how much
I can't even find the words to express my gratitude
I can't even find the right words.
(FANZA + dlsite combined)

I can't tell you how happy I am that just
one more number on the sales page
I can't believe how happy I am
I'm still happy and sad about it.

The events of the first week after the sale
of the first DL doujin
A lot of things happened.
So many things have happened!

The next day, I received a message from Fanza.
You're doing great for your first doujin!
I saw on the support site that you're working on a second work.
I'm looking forward to it.
（I'm looking forward to it." (It was a very polite message.)

After exchanging a few emails with the above two people
I started to understand the environment surrounding doujin and adult-oriented
I started to understand the environment surrounding doujin and adult-oriented
I was also surprised at how fast the editors were checking
I was surprised at how quickly the editors were checking out new works.
I was surprised at how quickly the editors were checking out the new works.

I also received some
I've also been asked to do the usual things.
I started my doujin activities from "I want to create my own works.
But since I started out as a doujin
I just want to shut them all out.
I want to enjoy my work.
I'm spending my days

I've been doing it for over 10 years.
I have one friend who has been doing doujin activities for more than 10 years.
I have one friend.
We can talk about money, sales, etc.
We can talk about money, sales, etc.
I like to listen to her talk.

There are some trends.
There are times when sales are good and times when they are tough.
But...
My first impression of this person is that he seems to be having fun.
That's my first impression.

If there are people who will buy what I draw
If there are people who will buy what I draw
I thought, "What could be more fun than that?
I thought.
"Don't get carried away!
Don't get carried away, doujin is not that easy! and
You may experience some hardships in the future
But I have decided
I've decided to enjoy the activity.

Thank you for following me on each support site.
Thank you for your support!

The sequel "Summer Sex Reunion 2" progress and ideas

I'm waiting for the sequel!
If there are people who are waiting for the sequel
Thank you very much!

Here's the progress!
The day before yesterday, I finished the rough draft of all pages.
I started drafting last night.
What is a rough draft?
What is a rough draft?
A rough sketch is a drawing of a character's pose.
It's like a drawing.
By doing all this, it's easier to visualize
It will be easier to visualize the finished image.
Is the composition and consistency okay? or
or "Is the body position suddenly changed without any time lapse?
I can also notice strange things like that.

The draft is now about 20 pages
The draft is now about 20 pages done.
I changed the drafting process from Photoshop
I've changed the drafting process from Photoshop to Krista.
The composition (especially the direction of the face) of the erotic
I'm very happy with it.
I'm glad I did!

December is only two weeks away.
I think I might be able to
I think I might be able to get pretty good.

Trouble.
I've got the big picture down, but
I've been making frequent adjustments to the story.
There are a lot of changes in the pages.
It's currently 110 pages in total.

Every time I take a break
Every time I take a break, I come up with new ideas for the flow and situations.
Every time I take a break, I come up with new ideas.
I simply have too many things to draw with these characters.
There are simply too many things I want to draw with these characters.
That's why.

I read a very successful doujin once.
I read a very successful doujin once, and it was a little over 100 pages long.
It was erotic and wonderful, but
But halfway through, I was like, "Isn't that too long?" I thought.
I thought, "Isn't that too long?

I wonder if it's around 70~80p that you can read it in one go and get a sense of satisfaction.
I'd say it's around 70~80 pages.
On the other hand, if the introduction is 40p or so
I often think, "I want to read more.
I want to read more.

Of course, the quality of the content is the top priority.
But I can't help but feel
I can't get rid of the feeling of groping, and I'm struggling.

Plan Benefits
There are 8 people who have joined the plan on all the support sites.
We have 8 people who have joined our plan!
We're still waiting for the money to come in.
I'm still waiting for the money to come in.

I'm going to start using it for my manga production.
I bought a rental server (half for two months) and
I bought some copy paper.
I've almost completely used up all my support money.
Thank you very much everyone!

In addition to the benefits of each plan
In addition to the benefits of each plan
I'd like to have a main feature that says,
"You can see this when you enter the Water Lotus Inn plan.
I'd like to have a main feature where
you can see this when you enter the "Water Lotus Inn" plan.

I'm not sure if I'll make it a manga or use the differences.
I'm undecided.
I'm thinking of focusing on a new sex scene
I'm thinking of making it the main part of the story.
It may be a few pages or a few pages.
After that, Keito and Aoi went shopping and
And they had sex.
And that night...

The doujin has a story, but
But Plan is a short story.
You can focus only on the H part.
"Oh, this is good for drawing practice?
It might be good.

Because of the privilege
There may be some roughness in the plan
but
I hope you like Aoi, Suiren, and the others.
If you like Aoi and Suiren
It might be a tasty bonus!

My priority is to complete the main story
I hope you'll continue to support me
I hope you will continue to support me
I'll be happy if you continue to support me.

About commerce
It was released on November 26th.
Exterminators Volume 4, which was released on November 26th.
Yesterday it was reprinted!

In late January of next year
The latest 10 volumes of Efficiency Kitchen Mage
will be released in late January next year.
We had a meeting yesterday, and
The number of copies is steadily increasing!

Thank you very much for picking up both of them!
Thank you very much!

I've been talking about it on Twitter
I've been talking a lot about doujinshi.
I've been getting a lot of comments like, "You're neglecting the commercial world!" I know.
I know.
The efficiency is up until next summer.
The exterminator has already finished the manuscript until spring.
（I'll be taking a break to work on the book.)
The schedule and timing of publication
I'll tweet you when it appears again.
I'll tweet you when it's published again.
"Oh, you're Asakawa, who recently drew an erotic doujin.
How's your commercial work going?
I'll take a look.
I'd be happy if you could read it.

I'm planning to post one or two more
I'm planning to post one or two more

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現状と感謝と特別な2000人

今回長いので
合間にでも良かったら読んで下さい

◆感謝と報告
初めての同人作品
サークル水蓮の宿『夏のヤリなおし』を
お買い求め頂いた皆様ありがとうございます

11日（0時）から販売開始して以降
「売れるのか？本当に売れるのか・・・？」
「や、やったーどこかの誰かが
今1冊買ってくれたぞウォォーッ」
と緊張とドキドキな時間が今も続いています

未読の方やダウンロード同人とか
買ったことないよ～なんて方も
『夏のヤリなおし』は昨今の同人に見られる
ハードなものではありませんので
どれ試しにとお買い求め頂けましたら幸いです

ありがたいことにランキングに入れたり
フォローや感想を呟いてくれる方も
いらっしゃたりと予想以上に多くの方の
目に止まってくれたおかげで
興味を持った読者さんが
支援サイトにも訪れてくれたりと
望外な成果となりつつあります
ありがとうございます

ブログへのアクセスはこの2日間30~40倍に
（普段どんだけ少ないんだよって話ですが）
プラン加入してくれた方もいてありがとう！

13日お昼の時点で
2000ダウンロードを越えました(ﾜｰﾊﾟﾁﾊﾟﾁ!)
商業では数十万、100万部が至る所に
溢れているのでたかが・・・と思いました？

全っ然そんなことないんです
ほぼ１から１０まで
自分で作り上げその結果
少なくとも2000人がお財布から
お金を出してくれたという事実の
多幸感が凄まじいです

逆に今はそれがプレッシャーにも
なっているのですが
走り始めたら行くしかないだろということで
2作目も制作開始しています

◆お蔵出し
以下は『夏のヤリなおし』初期デザイン

こういったものを載せるのも面白いかなと
”真夏日に田舎に帰省してきて離れで美人姉妹と汗だくSEX”
という描きたいテーマがバチッと決まっていました
デザインはすでに完成している感はありますね
あのコマはこのラフ使ってるじゃんて
お気付きになるかも

ノスタルジー、田舎らしさを出すのなら
離れではなく蔵とかでも良いかもと考えたのですが
でも蔵は地面が土だし痛くない？
という理由で離れになりました
でもそういったシチュエーションは響きますし
2作目ではそれが反映されています

◆2作目の進捗報告

先日チビネームが完成しその後
半日置いて見る目をフラットにし
チェックし修正
ほぼ100%ストーリーが完成しました
全96p・・・ページ増えてますね～

長すぎるのでどこかで切って
値段下げつつの方が？とも
検討中しているところです

※
自分は商業優先で
待ち時間に同人制作というスタンスを
取っているため長尺になった場合
次回作が大幅に遅れる可能性があるためです

96p分枠線を引くのも面倒でしたが
今日これから下書き作業に入ります
また直近で進捗報告予定です

◆現状について
同人をはじめたことで
”漫画を新たに作る”に加え
支援サイトを作って好き放題日記書いたり、
やらなきゃいけないこと、
先を見越した準備と
初めてのことで不慣れなせいもあり
やりたいことが渋滞しています

プラン加入して下さった向けに
「今こういうの描いてるよエロくない？」とか
「こういう描き方イイゾ」とか
面白いと思うんですよね
まだ記事にプランのすみ分けは
作っていませんが良い暇つぶしを
提供できたらと思っています
渋滞中ゆえ今しばらくお待たせします

引き続きサークル水蓮の宿を
どうぞよろしくお願い致します

下書き頑張るぞー
オーッ

This is a long story.
If you want to read it in between, please do.

Thanks and report
My first doujin work
Thank you very much to everyone
who bought my first doujin work,
"Summer Sex Rehearsal" by Circle Suiren no Yado.
Thank you to everyone who bought it!

Since the sale started on the 11th (midnight)
"Will it sell? Will it really sell?"
"Well, yay, someone somewhere just bought a copy!
Someone just bought a copy!
I'm still nervous and nervous.

If you haven't read the book,
or if you're a downloader, or if you've never bought a doujin before
If you haven't read it, or if you've never bought a downloadable doujin before
If you haven't read it, or if you've never bought a downloadable doujin before
You can buy it just to try it out.
I would be happy if you could buy it just to try it out.

Thankfully, we've been included in the ranking
There are also people who follow me and mutter their thoughts.
I'd like to thank you all for your support.
I'm very grateful for that.
Thanks to the readers who were interested
Some of the readers who were interested also visited our support site.
It is becoming an unexpected result!
Thank you very much!

Access to the blog has increased 30-40 times in the past two days.
(How little traffic do you usually get?)
Thank you to those who subscribed to the plan!

As of noon on the 13th
As of noon on the 13th, we had over 2000 downloads.
Hundreds of thousands or even a
million copies are everywhere in commerce.
Did you think it was only a few thousand?

That's not true at all!
I created the book from almost 1 to 10
I made it myself, and as a result
The fact that at least 2,000 people have
taken money out of their wallets
The euphoria of the fact that at least 2000 people
have taken money out of their wallets
The euphoria is amazing!

On the other hand, it's also putting pressure on me now.
On the other hand, it's also putting pressure on me right now.
But once we start running, we have to go.
I've already started work on the second one.

The following is a sample of the work.
The following is the initial design of "Summer sex rehearsal".

I thought it would be interesting to post something like this
I thought it would be fun to put up
something like this:
"I come home to the countryside in the
middle of summer and have sweaty sex with
beautiful sisters in a remote place.
I had already decided on the theme I wanted to draw.
I feel like I've already completed the design.
You might have noticed that I used this rough sketch for that panel.
You might have noticed.

If you want to create a nostalgic, country atmosphere
I thought it might be better to use a
storehouse instead of a detached house.
But the ground of a storehouse is dirt, so wouldn't it hurt?
That's why we decided on a detached house.
But the situation resonates with me.
The second work reflects this.

Progress report on the second work

The other day, I finished my little name.
I let it sit for half a day
Checked and revised
The story is now almost 100% complete!
The total length of the story is 96 pages...
That's a lot of pages!

It's too long, so I'll cut it somewhere.
It's too long, so you might want to cut it somewhere
and lower the price. I'm considering it.
I'm considering it.

I'm considering it.
I prioritize commercial work.
I'm taking a stance of creating doujinshi in the waiting time.
If it becomes too long
If it becomes too long, there is a possibility that
my next work will be significantly delayed.

It was a hassle to draw a frame line for 96 pages, but
I'm going to start drafting today.
I will report the progress soon.

About the current situation
Now that I've started a doujin
In addition to making new manga.
I've made a support site, and I'm writing a diary as much as I want.
I have a lot of things I have to do.
I have to prepare for the future and
I'm not sure if it's because I'm new to this
I have a lot of things to do.

For those who joined the plan
"I'm drawing something like this now, isn't it erotic?" or
"I like the way you draw this."
I think it's interesting.
I haven't made a classification of plans in the article yet.
I haven't created a plan yet,
but I'm hoping to provide a good way to pass the time.
I'm hoping to provide a good way to pass the time.
I'm still in the middle of a traffic jam,
so I'll keep you waiting for a while.

Please continue to visit the Circle Water Lily Inn
I'm working on the draft.

I'll work hard on the draft!
Ooh!

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『夏のヤリなおし2』制作進捗

先の投稿の通り
今夜11日（0時）より
初同人作品『夏のヤリなおし』(全84p)
販売開始しますので
手に取って頂けましたら幸いです

◆『夏のヤリなおし２』チビネーム完成
まだ処女作が販売開始前ですが
先日から続編の2の作業を開始しまして
先ほどチビネームが完成しました

チビネームとは漫画用語ではなく
僕がただそう呼んでるだけなのですが
’漫画のセリフとコマ割りのみ’を
描き起こしたものです
（絵は無し、あってもメモ程度）

商業デビュー当時から全ての作品で
やっている手法でA3の大きな紙を
16分割してそこにひたすら描いては消してを
繰り返しネームの原型を作っています

僕は
漫画はネームで全てが決まると
思っていましてそうすると
そのネームをどれだけ良いものに、
後々見直したときにあ～ちょっとここ良くないかも
…なんて思いたくないわけです

小さく分割することで消しゴムを使わず
何度もトライ&エラーを素早くでき、
16ページ分を見渡せるので
全体のテンポや見せゴマなど
引いた目で客観視できる非常に
効率的な方法だと思っています
（現在連載を持っている駆除人なども
この方法を取っています）

50pの商業ネームに対し
チビネームでは80pや100pくらい
毎回のびのびとまず描ききり
そこからぎゅっと
詰めていくなんてことも多いです

◆
さて続編『夏のヤリなおし２』ですが
全91pになってしまいました

長すぎるのでは？と
思うところもあるのですが
好きなように描けるのも同人の魅力ですし
無駄なページがあるわけでもないので
これを形にしたいなと

ただ問題もあり
1月下旬までに販売できたらとも
考えていましてそうすると
今日(１２月１０日)から数えて
あと40日ほどで91p脱稿は
ちょっと厳しいんじゃないかと
悩んでいるところです
※販売価格を下げて分割する手も、
それならさほど間を空けず
3作目もお届けできます

1作目の『夏のヤリなおし』は
2021年8月末～12月上旬に脱稿したので
およそ４カ月弱という長い時間が
かかってしまいましたが
この４カ月の中で
次回作を見越した同人の
作業工程の確率化と効率化を
相当詰めたので
それが２作目からは活きてくれるでしょう

まだまだ考えることは多いですが
時間が空いてる今のうちに
できるだけ進めてみます

頑張りますので
応援宜しくお願い致します

‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
As per my earlier post
Tonight, from the 11th (midnight)
I will start selling my first doujin work,
"Summer Sex Rehearsal" (84 pages)
I hope you can pick it up.
I'd be happy if you could pick it up.

The name of "Natsu no Yari Naoshi 2" is completed!
I've been working on the sequel 2 since the other day.
The other day, I started work on the sequel, 2.
I've just completed the small name.

The name "Chibiname" is not a manga term.
It's just what I call it.
It's a drawing of the 'dialogue and frame layout of the manga only'.
I drew it up.
(There are no pictures, or if there are, they're just notes.)

It's a method I've used in all my works
since my commercial debut.
I took a large A3 sheet of paper and
divided it into 16 sections.
I divided a large A3 sheet of paper
into 16 parts and repeatedly drew and erased on it.
I draw and erase on it repeatedly to
make a prototype of the name.

I believe
I believe that everything in manga is determined by the name.
I believe that everything is determined by the name.
I believe that the name determines everything.
I don't want to think,
"Oh, maybe this part isn't good..." when I review it later.
I don't want to think, "Oh, maybe this part isn't good.

By dividing it into smaller pieces,
I can do it without using an eraser.
You can quickly make multiple trials and errors, and
You can see the whole 16 pages.
I can look over 16 pages and see the
overall tempo and presentation.
I think it's a very efficient way to look at things objectively.
I think it's a very efficient method.
(The exterminator, who is currently writing a series
(The exterminator, who is
currently serialized, also uses this method.)

In contrast to a 50-page commercial name
(The exterminators who are currently serialized
also use this method.
The first thing to do is to draw it out freely each time.
There are many cases where
There are also many cases where
I have to tighten things up.

I'm sure you'll agree.
Now, the sequel, "Summer sex again 2"...
It's now 91 pages long!

Isn't it too long? I think so.
There is a part that I think
It is also the charm of doujin that you can draw as you like.
It's not like there are any wasted pages.
I'd like to give this a form.

But there is a problem.
I'd like to be able to sell it by the end of January.
I've been thinking about it.
If I count from today (December 10th)
I think it's going to be a little difficult to
publish 91 pages in about 40 days
I'm wondering if it's too much to ask.
I'm worried about that.
I'm wondering if I can lower the selling price and split it up.
If that's the case, I'll be able to deliver the
third one without too much of a gap.
I can deliver the third one without much delay.

The first one, "Summer Rehearsal," will be available from
The first one, "Summer Sex Reunion," was
written between the end of August and the
beginning of December 2021.
It took me a long time to finish it
It took me a long time.
In these four months
In these four months, I was able to improve
the probability and efficiency of the work
process in anticipation of my next work.
In these four months, I made a lot of
improvements in the probability and
efficiency of the work process
and efficiency of the work process
I'm sure that will come in handy for the second one.

I still have a lot to think about.
I'll try to make as much progress as
possible while I still have free time.
I'll try to get as much done as I can.

I'll do my best.
Thank you for your support!

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