关于剧本(请看视频) / About story script (Watch the video)

没错，游戏还没有释出，一延再延。
我知道有些人等很久了，所以为了防止负面的猜测，我录下了剧本的细节。
这个视频可以证明我有写剧本，如果在任何一个时间点按下暂停，就能看到剧本细节。我在每个剧情的节点都有计算文本字数，总和确实超过2万个中文字。
怕有些人会认为我既不更新又不做事。请相信我，我并不是那样的创作者。
CG早已释出了(100日元赞助者Only)，剧本也释出了，有了这些证据会让我好说话。
接下来是这次文章的重点。

首先，这次不是因为我过度的自我要求而延期，而是根据我两周前做的市场调查(参考大部份人的答案)，得出一个结论：我不认为「露露比」是已经能拿来卖的商品。
客观而言，这个游戏的剧本有个很大的缺点，就是想做角色塑造，但是又没有深度。
我在剧情中加入了日常篇幅，但结果看来却没有对游戏起到加分的作用，同时还让剧情变得拖沓。
另外，以我个人主观而言，H场景的对白不算太好。
我原本抱持「第一次做游戏就不要太要求自己了」的想法，但是后来又想想，这并不代表我能随意把东西做出来然后草草卖给大家。不过这样说是有点夸张了，我其实是很认真在看待「制作游戏」的，只是很多事情是初次尝试，能力还在锻炼中，如果没试错更多次就把游戏拿来卖，我感觉不是很好。

言归正传，我目前有两个选择：
(A) 把剧本扩展，做出完整的深度，但是对我这个编剧新手而言，这听起来不切实际。
(B) 全部重写，完全不做深度，往成人游戏的极端走，「色」就完事。(DLsite上有很多这类的对象可以学习)

依照前面提到的市场调查，我发现很多人并不在意剧本的深度。
以游玩经验的角度来看，我个人也玩过很多毫无剧情深度的NTR H-Game，但它们还是不错的作品。
所以仔细想想，我没有必要在缺乏足够经验的情况下去逼自己写一个有深度的剧本，更何况我要做的是H-Game。

我目前真的需要多一段时间来钻研编剧跟Coding，还得继续增进我的画技。
考虑到我最多只收一个月100日元的赞助，加上我是真的有在做事，我希望可以得到大家的体谅。
同时也十分感谢有持续赞助100日元的人，我知道你们很期待我做的游戏。
总之，请各位给我更多时间去学习与试错。

Yep, the game has not been released yet, and there have been several delays.
I know some of you have been waiting for a long time, so to prevent any negative thoughts, I have recorded a video of the story script. This video can prove that I have been working on it; if you pause at any point, you can see the details. I have counted it and the total indeed exceeds 20,000 Chinese characters.
I'm concerned that some might think I'm neither updating nor working. Please believe me, I am not that kind of creator.
The CGs have already been released (for 100 yen patrons only), and the script has been released as well. With these evidence, I hope to clear any doubts.
Now, onto the point of this update.

Firstly, the delay this time is not due to my mental problem of perfectionism, but is based on a market survey two weeks ago (referencing most people's answers) which led me to a conclusion: I don’t think "Luluvi" is a well-made game ready to be sold. Objectively speaking, there is a significant flaw in the game's script—it attempts character development but lacks depth.
I added daily life plots to the story, but it seems that this did not positively impact the game and instead made it kinda slow and boring. Moreover, personally speaking, the dialogue in the H scenes isn't great.
Initially, I thought, "Don't be too hard on yourself for your first game," but then I realized that this doesn't mean I can just hastily sell anything to everyone. Although saying this might be an exaggeration, I've been pretty serious about "making games." It's just that many things are my first attempt, and my skills are still being honed. If I were to sell the game without trying and failing more, I wouldn’t feel right about it.

Back to the point, I currently have two options:
(A) Expand the script to achieve complete depth, but for a novice writer like me, this seems impractical.
(B) Rewrite everything, completely forgoing depth and going to the extreme of adult games—just focus on the "erotic" aspect. (There are many such examples on DLsite to learn from)

Based on the market survey mentioned earlier, I found that many people don't care about the depth of the script.
From my personal gameplay experience, I've played many NTR H-Games without any story depth, and they are still decent works.
So, after some thought, I realized there's no need to force myself to write a deep script without sufficient experience, especially since I'm making a H-Game.

I really need more time to study scriptwriting and coding, and to continue improving my drawing skills.
Considering I only take up to 100 yen in patronage per month, and I am indeed working on everything, I hope for everyone's understanding.
I also greatly appreciate those who continue to support me with 100 yen, knowing how much you look forward to my game.
In any case, please give me more time to learn and make mistakes.